Original:

It was a sunny day when John decided to visit The Metropolitan Museum of Art in New York City. John, who is a firefighter, has always loved art and wishes to pursue painting once he retires. Before heading out to the museum, he went to a coffee shop and bought his favorite, a double espresso. After finishing his coffee, he reached the museum. The museum was bustling with people appreciating the art, the exhibits were displaying both contemporary and classic art. He explored the gallery, admiring the various painters’ work from different eras. Interested in the Impressionist painters, he found peace in the serene and vibrant works of artists like Monet and Renoir. The visit inspired him so much, he decided to take up painting courses after his retirement. But before his retirement, he still needed to work on a project of saving a cat stuck in a tree.

Rewritten:

On a sunny day, John decided to visit The Metropolitan Museum of Art in New York City. John, an art lover, planned to pursue painting after retirement. The museum, filled with art enthusiasts, showcased a variety of contemporary and classic art exhibits. John admired the work of various painters throughout different eras, finding particular interest in the Impressionist painters. Artists like Monet and Renoir resonated with him through their serene and vibrant works. Inspired by his visit, John decided to take up painting courses following his retirement.